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Wednesday, July 11, 2007

Give Into Free Form Thought

the muse
the thief
the uncontrolled spectre
slinks past me.

One
Two
Three
4

It's more for me
than it is for you
and I've been lost the the iambic pentameter

Lost quatraints
and given rules of creation
Jesus
Lucifer
Antagonist
Progenitor
mmmm................

4 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

yes, I did catch a show in London
it was
something else
an incredible performance
I gave Steve a four leaf clover
I have found many
pressed them in books
some, I give away
others I keep
humans
have done as many
tragic things as
beautiful ones
I am hoping that we can discover another way
to coexist
before we do relieve the earth
of our gifts by our curses

yes, I was digging through the archives
and dig what I have read
the articulate air
of Gemini
what passion for experience
and a gift for writing it all down
lovely fern picture
last time I was in Hawaii
in volcanoe natl' park there were giant ferns
perhaps 12 feet tall
people were taking photos of other people next to the ferns
to demonstrate scale
I took a moment to notice
how humans compare contrast and catalogue
encounters
in order to best communicate
how large these ferns really
are
they compared them to a person
interesting...

~J

Thu Jul 12, 05:06:00 AM 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

okay
I just saw this program on polar bears
scientists givin them 10 more years
at best
so its too late then
to turn back the tide on the
eventually complete
destruction of our fragile ecosystem
it will continue to happen degree by degree
as a Jupiter native
I am forever an optimist, and I don't like to admit
your assessment of humankinds impact
is unfortunately accurate
well, hopefully a few more summer days are left
I'd really like to have that amber brew with you
I have more questions...
I'd like to ask
of you
the name of this muse
the face of the thief
what is behind door number 5
where do you reside
in this life
and why so far...
tell me
what colour do you like to look at most
I'd like
to know
somehow, I've been here
asking questions
feel free,
free form
to ask your own
if you
like

~J

Thu Jul 12, 05:11:00 PM 2007  
Blogger Melquiades said...

Greetings Tilda aka ~J, aka blue eyes, aka gatherer of clovers ;-),

I am enjoying this dalliance
It's funny the people that I've met through Mr. Kilbey. He truly is a magician.
They've had paramount effects on my life.
The first was a good friend I found through web sites devoted to the boys. He helped me immeasureably. Now, you come along so mysterious and intriguing. I'm intrigued. Life's mysteries are just getting started, once again.

ok.

I remember Killa mentioning the four leaf clover you gave him:-)))))) very sweet of you. very.

human nature balance-I agree, humans have made immense contributions to living with the earth.

Thank you for impressions of my archives. I truly appreciate your words. I think your writing speaks volumes as well - leaves room for interpretation and room for the reader to identify.

YOu've been to Hawaii? Sounds like you travel a fair amount. London on a whim, Hawaii again. that's great.

more to come.............

Thu Jul 12, 10:45:00 PM 2007  
Blogger Melquiades said...

poor polar bear. the represent that region, don't they. There are plenty of species to fall to this polar shift.

I am an optimist too (couldn't tell by your writing!). seriously, I am. And I mean that. It's just a more convoluted indirect way of thinking of the human race. Whenever one professes that the blame should be pointed at oneself, the defense mechanism ensuses. Yeah, the human race has a huge defensiveness about it. I don't find fault. It's natural. I mean hell, we've made it this far. It's the rallying cry. don't give into defeat. that's negative. That's just weird, right?

Where was I?

the amber brew..yes. I've never been to Washington. :-))))))

name of muse: hmmmm.....not sure, really. I don't think it has one. I mean that. that came on me spontaneously. It's like all my writing. it comes from somewhere, but it surely isn't conscious. That's my favorite perspective. It's like leaving my body. I am cherish this.

door number 5. Monty Hall only knows.

I reside in Maryland. yeah, I know that sucks! I feel the same way. wouldn't it be great if we were neighbors. I could just ring you and say, let go down to the pub and get an amber or hey let's go wander the city streets or....

Thu Jul 12, 11:24:00 PM 2007  

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